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But here it is, friends.
What you should know
- I want this project to be detailed, but am not really sure what time constraints to follow, so advice on that would be great!
- My project is about writing in the medical field, which is tricky business. I want to explain things as simply as possible, so hopefully that is achieved.
Major Weaknesses
- I am 100% aware of the fact that public speaking is NOT one of my strengths. Even when I am not actually in front of people, I still sound terrible. Just knowing other people are going to be listening to this makes me feel all weird and nervous. I am trying my best so please let me know what specific sections need re-recording. Trust me, I know my voice is terrible, I'm kind of just aiming for decent at this point.
- I am not sure if I am adding information that is not necessary. I do not know how long podcasts typically are. Is mine too short? Too long?
- I am not tech-savvy so I did not add sound effects yet, but I will figure it out eventually.
Major Strengths
- I think I do a good job at explaining the different genres. They are fairly straightforward.
- I use the interview segments adequately and to a reasonable extent. Those segments serve as back ups to my claims, but do not drown out my voice.
- I use good examples that illustrate the structure and content of the genres.
The Hyperlink
Here is the Rough Cut. Please be critical but don't make me cry.
Hi Bianca,
ReplyDeleteI peer reviewed your rough cut on spreaker & I made a blog post but forgot to comment and show you-sorry it's late but here it is if you're curious :)
http://vfunsenglish.blogspot.com/2016/03/peer-review-for.html