Sunday, February 21, 2016

My Pronouns

Moving along with the train of local revision, the next stop is pronouns!

This is important because the pronouns used to address the stakeholders can influence the audience's perception of the story.

Rubensson, Fredrik. "Writing". 7/20/13 via flickr. Attribution Share-Alike 2.0 Generic.

Here is a list of all the pronouns I used in my QRG draft along with who the pronoun is referring to.

  • doctors (residents and physicians)
  • Medical administration (UW)
  • themselves (medical staff)
  • people (medical staff)
  • medical resident (doctors)
  • they (residents)
  • doctors (residents)
  • doctors (residents)
  • medical residents (at UW)
  • residents (at UW)
  • UWHA
  • they (residents)
  • they (residents)
  • they (residents)
  • they (residents)
  • nurses (at UW)
  • residents (doctors)
  • young doctors (residents)
  • UWHA
  • incoming doctors (medical school graduates)
  • UWHA
  • UWHA
  • UW (administration)
  • UWHA
    employees (residents at UW)
  • residents (at UW)
  • they (residents)
  • they (UW administration)
  • Seattle City Council
  • residents (at UW)
  • residents (at UW)
  • she (Katie B.)
  • he (Andrew K.)
  • he (Graham S.)
  • organization/they (Accredited Council for Graduate Medical Education)
  • they (residents)
  • they (physicians)
  • staff (doctors)
  • UWHA
  • UW admin
  • they (residents)

How can I minimize the usage of some of these pronouns?

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