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I want to know if this section is effective at all? If not, how can I further edit it?
Selection from rough cut:
Re-edited selection:
How did the content change? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively?
- I shortened the part where I talk about my personal reason for going on the trip. Instead, I talk about who the group of volunteers are in general and why our career goals match the mission of these volunteer organizations.
- I feel like this is more effective, because it explains the reasons for going quickly.
- I also added a briefer summary of how clinic and project days were run.
- This is more effective because it summarizes the hours we worked and what we did.
- I might add a mini calendar thing to this to make it easier to visualize the week.
How did the form change? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively?
- I added text, which helps the audience follow along with what I am saying.
- I edited the picture order that I used so that the pictures displayed on the screen match the activity I am describing. This makes it way easier to follow along!
- I added some transition effects between pictures, which is more visually appealing and keeps the audience engaged.
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