I have taken lots of advice and have edited like crazy. In this post, I will share my fine cut, which is probably going to be the final version I turn in.
"Editing". 1/15/16 via pixabay. CC0 Public Domain. |
- I have changed the direction of my argument so the information is presented in a different way than before. I am focusing more on introducing a problem then suggesting solutions.
Major Strengths
- I think I use video, audio, music, text, and still images well, which helps the video flow well.
- I also use a variety of resources to help meet the genre conventions.
Major Weaknesses
- The volume of the voice-over and the music inserts are not even. The music is louder than the voice-over, which is a tad bit annoying.
- I think my voice overall could be better and clearer.
Fine Cut
The link can be found here.
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